Tuesday, 7 June 2011

Why don't we live like stars?

WHY DON'T WE LIVE LIKE STARS?
 
Why don't we live like stars?
Always at the top
Shining  gracefully above the universe
Smiling happily and feeling proud
Twinkling with sophistication
Beguiled by the huge moon
Encored withg everyone's brava's and bravisaimo's
Exuberance in us never lies
Get time for loafing before th beauteous sunset
Determination to glow for years and years
Saved from problems occurring on earth
Lying motionless arounfd the space
Shimmering is our quality
Silver a prevail colour
Preogative is nature
But God always say
You must be happy with what you have,
Now keeping this thing
In my complicated mind
I say now
May we could live like stars
 
ANSH GUGNANI
AGE- 12
SELF COMPOSED

6 comments:

  1. good poem... very matured in comparison to age....

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  2. Dear Ansh.
    Really a nice poem with a nice question at heart.Very promising approach.God bless you ,dear.

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  3. thanks everyone for your heartily comments
    <3

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